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Les exemples sont très bons et l'explication est globalement bien aussi. Quelques typos à corriger.
En revanche il y a pour moi une erreur d'explication au niveau des dépendances sur la fin.
A revoir

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Resolve all requests

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Bonnes explications !
Seule remarque, je trouve un peu dommage de ne pas mettre en avant les avantages des value objects. Ils sont bien définis, expliqués et exemplifiés, mais tu ne dis nulle part à quoi ils servent, en gros pourquoi éviter la primitive obsession. Peut-être un paragraphe supplémentaire à ajouter dans une future PR ?

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Emalios and others added 4 commits August 10, 2020 18:45
Co-authored-by: Antoine Tran <31257370+Tran-Antoine@users.noreply.github.com>
Co-authored-by: Antoine Tran <31257370+Tran-Antoine@users.noreply.github.com>

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@AntoineJT AntoineJT changed the title Add Value objects notion (fr) feat: add poo/value_objects Aug 12, 2020

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Il y a quelques trucs qui me paraissent bizarres :

  • le fait que tu parles de 2 caractéristiques principales mais que le document soit centré autour de 3 caractéristiques ;
  • la conclusion qui n'est qu'un regroupement des 3 caractéristiques.
    Je pense que pour la conclusion tu pourrais vite fait expliquer à quoi sert un value object en définitive, un peu comme un tl;dr quoi.

@LukaMrt LukaMrt added the enhancement New feature or request label Aug 25, 2020
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