portfolio: tighten card descriptions to an even length band (EN+NL) - #72
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The "what it proves" copy ranged 212-705 chars, a 3.3x spread. Cards sit in a 3-column grid with the description on flex-1, so every card in a row stretches to the tallest one and the short cards left visible dead space. All ten rewritten to 327-410 chars EN (337-440 NL) — a 1.25x spread, and 1.06-1.15x within each grid row. Trimmed the six long ones, mostly enumerations that did not earn their space: marketplace-intel-platform (705 -> 410), identity-service (607 -> 381), skills-coach (622 -> 377), retail-dynamic-pricing, and both contrail demos. Extended the two short ones, which caused the ragged first row: sovereign-llm-gateway gained the choke-point line, sovereign-copilot an explicit "reference architecture, not a running system". Every honest-framing marker is preserved: the maturity claims (docker compose up / make up / make demo), the reference-vs-working distinction, and the headline metrics (+6.4% revenue, +12.7% NDCG@10 over a popularity baseline). Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5 (1M context) <noreply@anthropic.com>
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The portfolio "what it proves" copy ranged 212–705 characters — a 3.3× spread. Cards sit in a
lg:grid-cols-3grid with the description onflex-1, so every card in a row stretches to the tallest one and the short cards left visible dead space.After
All ten rewritten in EN + NL to 327–410 chars EN (337–440 NL) — a 1.25× spread, and 1.06–1.15× within each grid row, which is where equal-height cards actually matter.
Trimmed the six long ones, mostly enumerations that didn't earn their space —
marketplace-intel-platform(705→410) lost its FastAPI-serving clause and the interference caveat,identity-service(607→381) the full admin-plane object list,skills-coach(622→377) its stack line, plusretail-dynamic-pricingand both contrail demos.Extended the two short ones, the real cause of the ragged first row:
sovereign-llm-gatewaygained the choke-point line,sovereign-copilotan explicit "reference architecture, not a running system."Honesty preserved
No maturity claim moved. The
docker compose up/make up/make demomarkers, the reference-vs-working distinction, and the headline metrics all survive — including the "+12.7% NDCG@10 over a popularity baseline" qualifier in both locales.Verification
npm run typecheck,npm run lint,npm test(9 passing) andnpm run buildall pass.🤖 Generated with Claude Code