The subtitle names the deep learning, and what runs today is four paragraphs - #63
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…agraphs The one-line summary said the project fuses SAR with AIS, which reads as a data-fusion exercise and leaves a reader unable to tell a trained detector from a CFAR threshold. It now says deep learning does the detection and the AIS fusion is what it is, which is the same boundary the 'two deep learning components' list already draws further down. The paragraph after the four-level table carried what runs, what is real and what is still a stand-in in one twelve-line block, in that order. Same sentences, split three ways and reordered so what runs comes first.
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Two README changes, both about what a reader takes from the first screen.
The subtitle. It said
Detecting undeclared vessels by fusing Sentinel-1 SAR imagery with AIS records over Danish waters— which describes a data-fusion exercise, and leaves a reader unable to tell whether the detector is a trained network or a CFAR threshold. It now reads:That is the same boundary the
Two deep learning components sit inside thislist already draws at line 83, and the same one line 113 closes: deep learning does the detection, the AIS interpolation and matching are geospatial data engineering. Nothing is claimed beyond what the file already claims.The paragraph after the four-level table. It carried three things in one twelve-line block — what runs today, what is real at both ends, what is still a stand-in — and opened on the stand-in. Same sentences, split three ways and reordered so what runs comes first.
One wording change was forced by the reorder:
The chain that carries these was built firstlostthat carries these, because moving the sentence into the third paragraph orphaned the pronoun from the four levels it pointed at.Longest block goes from 12 lines to 6. The bold leads are a new pattern in this document; if you would rather not introduce it, the same split works without them.