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| <title>About iSCSI</title> | ||||||
| <title>What is iSCSI?</title> | ||||||
| <meta name="maintainer" content="amrita.sakthivel@suse.com" its:translate="no"/> | ||||||
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| Note that LU (Logical Unit) is the data container or virtual disk and LUN (Logical Unit Number) is the numerical address of the container. | ||||||
| Linux iSCSI provides iSCSI initiator and iSCSI LIO (Linux-IO) target software for connecting Linux servers to central storage systems. | ||||||
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| <section xml:id="what-is"> | ||||||
| <title>What is iSCSI and how does it work?</title> | ||||||
| <para>In a physical iSCSI environment, the initiator is the server’s software that requests data, the LIO target is the physical storage appliance that hosts the data and the LUN (Logical Unit Number) represents the specific physical disk capacity assigned to the server.</para> | ||||||
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| <listitem><para><emphasis role="bold">The iSCSI Initiator:</emphasis>The initiator is the physical server that needs to consume the storage. It initiates the conversation with the target.</para> | ||||||
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| <title>Key characteristics of remote iSCSI storage</title> | ||||||
| <para>Following are some the common characteristics of iSCSI:</para> | ||||||
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| <title>Use cases for remote iSCSI storage</title> | ||||||
| <title>What are the main use cases for iSCSI storage?</title> | ||||||
| <para>The common use cases for iSCSI include:</para> | ||||||
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| <listitem><para><emphasis role="bold">Virtualization:</emphasis> Servers running VMware or Hyper-V store virtual machines on remote iSCSI targets so that if one physical server dies, another can immediately take over the disk over the network.</para></listitem> | ||||||
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| <step><para>Install the iSCSI Initiator if needed:</para> | ||||||
| <screen>&prompt.sudo; zypper install install open-iscsi</screen> | ||||||
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| <step><para>This step is optional as the Initiator name is set by default. Configure the Initiator name. The name must match the ACL created on the Target. | ||||||
| Open the configuration file: </para> | ||||||
| <screen>vi /etc/iscsi/initiatorname.iscsi</screen> | ||||||
| <para>Edit the line to match:</para> | ||||||
| <screen>InitiatorName=iqn.2026-04.com.example:sles.initiator</screen> | ||||||
| <para>Restart the service:</para> | ||||||
| <screen>&prompt.sudo; systemctl restart iscsid </screen> | ||||||
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| <para>The following steps are optional as the Initiator name is set by default.</para> | ||||||
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So that it's not repetitive of the chapter title: